Penyuntingan Mekanis Naskah Novel "Serah Terima Luka-Luka" Ditinjau dari Unsur Intrinsik

The final project product that produced is a fiction novel addresses the theme of the sandwich generation issue entitled “Serah Terima Luka-Luka”. This report discusses the mechanical editing process of the manuscript of "Serah Terima Luka-Luka" by examining its intrinsic elements in the form of plot, characters development and characterizations, and setting of the script’s story. The editing of the manuscript of "Serah Terima Luka-Luka" is carried out to improve mechanical weaknesses related to plot presentation, character development and characterization, as well as the construction of the setting in the story. The editing process utilizes the method of fiction editing, method of basic editing activities, the method of editing perspective based on forms of writing errors, and the method of editing stages. The results of the mechanical editing activity by reviewing the intrinsic elements, there are 30 cases related to mechanical weaknesses that have been corrected in the form of plot, characters and characterizations, as well as the setting in the story of the novel manuscript "Serah Terima Luka-Luka".

Keywords: fictional novel, sandwich generation, mechanichal editing, intrinsic elements, fictional editing

Produk Tugas Akhir yang penulis dan tim hasilkan adalah novel fiksi bertemakan permasalahan generasi sandwich yang berjudul “Serah Terima Luka-Luka”. Berkaitan dengan buku tersebut, penulis berperan sebagai penyunting. Oleh karena itu, laporan ini membahas tentang kegiatan penyuntingan mekanis pada naskah novel “Serah Terima Luka-Luka” dengan meninjau unsur intrinsik berupa alur, tokoh dan penokohan, serta latar cerita dalam naskah tersebut. Penyuntingan mekanis naskah novel “Serah Terima Luka-Luka” dilakukan dengan memperbaiki kelemahan mekanis terkait penyajian alur, pengembangan tokoh dan penokohan, serta pembangunan latar dalam cerita. Kegiatan penyuntingan yang dilakukan menggunakan metode studi pustaka berupa penyuntingan fiksi, kegiatan dasar penyuntingan, penyuntingan berdasarkan bentuk kekeliruan dalam penulisan, serta tahapan-tahapan penyuntingan. Hasil dari kegiatan penyuntingan mekanis dengan meninjau unsur intrinsik tersebut, telah diperbaiki sebanyak 30 kasus terkait kelemahan mekanis berupa alur, tokoh dan penokohan, serta latar dalam cerita naskah novel “Serah Terima Luka-Luka”.

Kata Kunci: novel fiksi, generasi sandwich, penyuntingan mekanis, unsur intrinsik, penyuntingan fiksi